Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Musical Poetry

Up beat
Don't Back down
"No, you can tell them all now.
I don't back up, I don't back down"
Inspired to make a change
No one will keep me down
You can try, but it won't work.




8 comments:

  1. You should make it longer!

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  2. Very good song. The poem is confusing which makes it interesting. One part of the poem disagrees with the other part which is humorous but it makes sense.

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  3. I really like what you have! You should try to extend it a little more!

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  4. I love the line:
    "No one will keep me down"
    It's detailed, and I like the meaning. :)

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  5. this is really good!

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  6. this is really well put together

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